Four Pepperdine University students were killed in a tragic accident on the Pacific Coast Highway in Malibu. The driver, Fraser Michael Bohm, lost control of his car and hit the students. Bohm, 22, was arrested but later released as investigations continue. The victims have been identified as Niamh Rolston, Peyton Stewart, Asha Weir, and Deslyn Williams.
I would be delighted to rephrase and present the text in a more sophisticated and professional manner using British English. Here is the revised version:
Original: “Hi there! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to let you know that the deadline for the project has been extended by a week. So, instead of submitting it on Friday, you now have until next Friday. Please let me know if you have any questions.”
Revised: “Greetings! I trust you are faring splendidly. Allow me to apprise you of the recent development regarding the project’s timeline. The deadline has been graciously extended by a week, thus granting you the privilege of submission until the forthcoming Friday. Should any queries arise, kindly notify me without hesitation.”
Original: “Hey, could you please send me that report by the end of the day? Thanks a lot!”
Revised: “Dear Sir/Madam, I would greatly appreciate it if you could kindly furnish me with the aforementioned report by close of business today. I extend my heartfelt gratitude for your cooperation.”
Original: “Sorry, I can’t make it to the meeting tomorrow. Something urgent has come up.”
Revised: “Regrettably, I am unable to attend tomorrow’s meeting due to the unforeseen emergence of an urgent matter.”
Original: “OMG, I just got a promotion! I’m so excited!”
Revised: “Goodness gracious! I have recently been bestowed with a promotion, an achievement that has ignited an immense sense of elation within me.”
Original: “Can you believe it? We won the contract! This is amazing news!”
Revised: “Would you believe it? Our unwavering efforts have culminated in the successful acquisition of the contract! Undoubtedly, this news is nothing short of extraordinary.”.