A 22-year-old driver in a dark-colored BMW was captured on surveillance cameras speeding before crashing into four Pepperdine University students in Malibu, killing them all. The driver, Fraser Michael Bhom, was speeding on Pacific Coast Highway when he lost control and crashed into the young women who were walking in the area. Bhom is now facing manslaughter charges. Authorities and community members are calling for improved safety measures on the dangerous stretch of PCH.
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