Joshua Hatfield was killed in a hit-and-run crash in Clovis, California. The 23-year-old victim was riding a motorized scooter when he was struck by an SUV. The SUV driver initially stopped but then swapped vehicles with another driver and fled the scene. Both drivers have been arrested and are facing charges. The investigation is ongoing.
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