The victims of a fatal car crash in Malibu have been identified as four students from Pepperdine University. The 22-year-old driver has been arrested. The accident occurred in the early hours of the morning and investigations are ongoing.
The text is revised and presented in a more sophisticated and professional manner using British English:
Original: “Hey, how’s it going? I wanted to talk about the new project we’re working on. Can we meet up tomorrow and discuss it?”
Rewrite: “Hello, I hope this message finds you well. I would like to discuss the forthcoming project we are currently engaged in. Would it be possible to arrange a meeting tomorrow for a detailed conversation on the matter?”
Original: “I think the new design looks good. What do you reckon?”
Rewrite: “In my opinion, the newly proposed design appears to be aesthetically pleasing. What are your thoughts on the matter?”
Original: “Sorry, I can’t make it to the meeting. Something urgent has come up.”
Rewrite: “I regret to inform you that I will be unable to attend the upcoming meeting as an unforeseen and pressing matter has arisen.”
Original: “I’m really excited about the upcoming event. It’s going to be awesome!”
Rewrite: “I am genuinely thrilled about the imminent event. It promises to be an exceptional occasion!”.