A man was killed and two others were injured in a mid-air collision at the Salt Lake County Flight Park in Draper. Initially, it was reported that one person was injured and one was killed. The collision involved a hang-glider and a paraglider, with the paraglider pilot dying on impact. The hang-glider pilot was later determined to have severe injuries and the passenger of the paraglider was critically injured. The Draper Police Department is investigating the incident.
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