The Metropolitan Police Department’s Homicide Branch is investigating a shooting that resulted in the death of a man on October 17th on East Capitol Street, NE. The victim, identified as 24-year-old Raequan Williamson, was found with gunshot wounds and died at the scene. The MPD is offering a reward for information leading to an arrest and conviction in the case.
The passage below is presented in a more sophisticated and professional manner using British English:
“Hey there! I hope you’re doing well. Just wanted to touch base with you and see if you had a chance to review the report I sent you yesterday. Let me know if you have any questions or need any further information. Thanks!”
“Dear Sir/Madam, I trust this message finds you in good health. I would like to take this opportunity to enquire whether you have had the chance to peruse the report that was dispatched to you yesterday. Please do not hesitate to contact me should you require any clarifications or additional details. I extend my gratitude in advance for your kind attention to this matter.”.