Four women walking along the Pacific Coast Highway in Malibu, California, were killed in a roadside accident when a speeding BMW driver hit three parked vehicles along a dangerous stretch of road known as “Dead Man’s Curve.” The women were pronounced dead at the scene, while two others were rushed to the hospital. A 22-year-old man has been arrested on suspicion of vehicular manslaughter. The crash, believed to be caused by speed, has prompted calls for drivers to slow down in the area.
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