Eight-year-old Zahmire Lopez, known as “Zah,” was shot and killed at his home in Newark, New Jersey, in May. Zahmire is one of over 1,300 children and teens killed by gunfire in the US so far in 2023, making firearms the leading cause of death among American youth. His mother, Leontine Niangara, remembers him through his love for music, football, and family.
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“Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for the opportunity to attend the conference organized by your esteemed institution. I would like to extend my deepest appreciation for the excellent arrangements made, which contributed to the success of the event.
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Yours faithfully,
[Your Name]”.